Wednesday, October 7, 2015

For my creative writing class

Another bit for my creative writing class. Poetry section! Second draft. Warning! A teeny bit risqué. ;-)


 
                           Velvet
 
What was once warmly inviting, tight and factory fresh,
Now a darkened cavern, radiant no more, desolate.
The verve of carnal indulgence, amusement, decadence
Now the blood shop, exit, functioning element, vessel.
 
What once were unyielding, sprightly, smooth, luxurious,
Now flaccid, amorphous, oblong and dispirited globes
The nerve endings that rang with rapture at each stroke
Now home to five diminutive digits or a tiny quiescent head.
 
What once was equitably smooth, firm, velvet, alluring,
Now a factory, padlocked, weathered, spent and beat-up.
To serve the engine of living, restocking incarnate shelves,
Some will expire, must be supplanted, but my shift is done.
 
What once was fresh and lean, functioned with vigor and vim
Now slack with dreadful scars, emblems of veneration, victory.
The MIRV? No, sir! Only a woman can execute this vocation.
The results as drastic, the boom as vast, sure destruction!
 
And yet…
 
What once was swollen, loitering below a mind quite distressed,
Now vacant but victorious! Certainly a wonder, a miracle made.
The curves and lines have transformed, the figure loose, drooping
The body, never the same. But can compensation be more great?
 
What once was worried, selfish, ill-equipped, irascible, vainglorious,
Now delighted, with uncluttered affection, extolling the circumstance.
To swerve now and then, forestalling some duties, but mostly………
Devoted, generous, giggling and imparting. Teaching the art of living.