Wednesday, December 14, 2016

The Wrong Couch- A piece of my Creative Writing Final Portfolio

Julie Rodriguez-Walker
3450
12/14/16
The Wrong Couch

Sitting down, it takes a moment before the first whiff hits but when it does, it rises quickly, creating a suffocating fog that fills your nostrils with its vapors and seeps into your clothing and your very skin. Sour, putrid, and immediately recognizable, the pungency will likely stay with you, lurking in the dark, stinky spaces of your memory, to be hopefully long- suppressed.
Still, the cushion is comfortable enough when one is worn down and looking forward to a late night bowl of cookies and cream; and for sure, even surrounded by the offending odor that comes with faulty Pull-Ups or just plain distraction, it is better than the hard living room floor or sitting at the kitchen table after nine hours of college classrooms and four hours of homework. Maybe. . .
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We bought the couch before our son—our middle child—was born. It was the wrong couch. My husband and I had prospected through several furniture and big box stores, planting our behinds on a never-ending stream of cushions; a variety of colors, styles, fabrics, and prices, for three weeks. We tried out the latest designer creations with big ticket prices, and the discount floor models with their scuffs and defects. Weeks of dedicated effort had brought us to a final decision; we picked a chocolate brown microfiber sectional with convenient movable ottomans that doubled as side tables. The cushions were stiff but their support structure was well-designed and would be perfect for afternoon naps, movie nights, and general relaxation. The basement family room was prepared in almost gleeful anticipation of delivery day. Other than our queen size bed—a floor model—this couch was our first brand new piece of furniture and we looked forward to the many benefits of our investment.
I was not home when the couch was delivered. The guys from the furniture store, and my husband, were together unable to get the individual pieces down our steep, narrow stairs to the basement. No amount of heaving and hoeing could overcome the sharp turn in the stairway. The job was impossible. In our naivety, we had neglected to measure both the stairs and the sofa parts. My husband—we had been married for almost three years—had to make a quick decision on his own that would affect our family for years to come. Returning to the furniture store, he settled on a similarly priced three-seated mocha-colored behemoth that boasted recliners on both side seats. It could be disassembled and maneuvered down the awkward staircase with the cooperation of three men, and by the time I got home, it was set up and the delivery guys were gone.
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With your legs folded beneath you, to avoid catching your foot on the metal support that has been poking through the foot rest for a few years now, you are assaulted as the scent from the sofa cushions finds its way to your taste buds, just as the ice-creamy goodness is melting on your tongue, your hand freezing in mid-air, spoon quivering. It seems desperately futile, trying to find comfort, enjoyment, or rest in such a place. What to do? The problem is that the perpetrators of this offense are sleeping snugly downstairs, angelic faces resting peaceful and serene, unaffected. Two little girls in their pink bunk beds with dolls clutched tightly against the soft rise and fall of their flannel nightdresses. Next door, in the newly walled-in family room, a little boy sleeps in what is now his own bedroom. Toothless, a weathered, but still dark blue dragon, once plush with soft stuffing, rests contorted and ragged in the skinny eight-year-old’s arms. The children won’t be roused or made to disinfect the family sofa. They will sleep and snore and the youngest will grind her teeth in the soft glow of a Disney princess night light. Consequences will come, but not until tomorrow. The only reasonable choice when the ticking wall clock—the one with Elvis Presley’s hips swaying enthusiastically—reads 1:00 am, is for you to make a half-hearted attempt with a few sprays of fabric freshener, which of course only makes the problem worse. Truly Lilac mixing with this stench, marinating in the couch cushions, will waft up and blow about the house, especially with the fan going in the entryway. You will be suffocating . . .  and Elvis will just keep dancing.
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I was disappointed when I found an unfamiliar couch in the basement after school that first night. I was attending two distance-education classes held at the local high school and did not get home from a study group until my husband and our only child, a daughter, were both sound asleep. Planning to catch a late-night talk show, I made my way downstairs with a small bowl of cold cereal. I was met with an imposing new couch that seemed to take up the entire living area of the basement. Still, it was softer than the classroom seat I had recently vacated, and the newly-assembled cushions were full. My knees were in rough shape after several years of long-distance running and three knee surgeries, so I found the recliners with their ample foot rests to be a suitable replacement for the movable ottomans of the couch my husband and I had picked out together. Two servings of cornflakes and three hours of TV later, I fell asleep and experienced my first fitful, restless night on that couch; there would be many more throughout the years and the discomfort would only grow worse.
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Opening windows to air out the room will do no good. You try anyway. The problem is that the offending juices have seeped down into the sofa frame, through the layers of fabric and stuffing. The wood and metal construction are permanently soiled and any efforts to completely fix this rancid problem will be wasted. What should you do? You can throw a blanket over your seat and hold super still so that nothing escapes from beneath the thin barrier. You try it—for only a few minutes. The blanket is now also soiled and it has done nothing to help your situation; the only options, at least immediately, are to either give up on the couch entirely and sit instead in the red wingback chair across the room, or else you can just call it a night.
 Going to bed is ruled out by the fact that one of your favorite TV shows is underway and a nearly full bowl of dessert still waits to please you. So instead you move to the red chair, far enough away to avoid the sickly sweet notes wafting from the couch that was never meant to be. With the ceiling fan now turned off, you enjoy the only vaguely smelly solitude until the show wraps up, the ice cream is mostly gone, and what’s left is too melty to be enjoyable. Leaving the smelly couch behind, you make your way down the narrow, steep stairs to bed.
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The wrong sofa sat in our basement family room for almost six years, witnessing the growth of our little family, and providing only minimal relaxation in its aging cushions. It was never ideal, or even marginally good, for sleeping on. The drawback to side recliners, is that horrible metal and wooden supports across the horizontal surface are necessary; so when we tried taking naps or would begin to doze during television reruns, the bars would dig into soft flesh and make comfortable rest impossible.
There were the dark nights when James, my husband, and I had been fighting; the couch was only slightly better than the battle ground of the marriage bed, and one or the other of us would invariably seek temporary refuge amidst its beckoning, and lumpy, cushions; to be joined eventually by the offending spouse, who would stumble in the dark, searching for the sofa. There we would sleep, silently entwined, until unified again in the morning, by mutual hatred of the couch that left us with cricks in our necks when the sun rose.
 The couch was there as I nursed my babies and cuddled my kids; it enveloped, if awkwardly, my mother and I as we mourned the tiny human that left my womb too soon. That poorly designed piece of furniture soaked up my tears and kept equally silent whether I was cursing God or speaking in a squeaky voice to a cooing infant. The wrong couch stood shabbily firm while I cozied up to my dad who would soon join my angel baby somewhere far, far away. His titanium knee replacements were no match for the impossible recliner foot rests that, once extended, refused to close back into the couch when he or anyone else wanted to get up. He sat there anyway, and I sat on the metal bar to be closer to him.
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You quietly tip toe into your bedroom and remove the clothes you’ve been wearing for two days, dropping them silently into the hamper. A deep, rumbling snore startles you as you climb into bed next to your husband. He nearly wakes up from his own sound—or from you reclaiming half of the bedcovers. Settling into the eleven-year-old mattress, your mind cues up a conga line of upcoming homework assignments, commitments to the kids’ school, the money you still need to pay the babysitter—the money that has been sitting on your bedside table for almost a week—emails that need to be answered, lightbulbs that still haven’t been replaced, bed sheets that desperately need to be washed; all of this as you try to fall asleep.
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Every few months my husband and I would take turns lamenting the couch that neither of us wanted and cursing its poor construction and want of comfort. We passionately discussed the feasibility of buying a new one, but with a growing family we would soon need another bedroom. Choices had to be made. New couch money was instead spent framing an additional bedroom out of our one-time family room, the only place that another room could be created. The old new couch would have to do, but our only son got to have a little space all his own. His excitement as he lined up action figures and Matchbox cars on his very own shelves overcame the inconvenience of having to dismantle the clumpy couch, and the bruises that came from James and I tag-teaming—a shove here, a twist there, and a few rough turns--the cumbersome pieces to get them up the narrow stairway. That beautiful little boy’s happiness made softer the fact that the very wrong, very awful couch, with its multitude of stains and its sagging cushions and foot rests, sat jimmy-rigged back together in my formal front room.
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Blaring Saturday morning cartoons are interrupted by tiny neighbors pounding incessantly on your front door upstairs. They will want to play with your kids and they won’t mind the smell that has now likely taken over the entire first floor of your house.  For hours, you hide in your bedroom downstairs, ignoring—no, avoiding—the necessary confrontation with your children, where they will be made to take responsibility for the nasty family couch and the post-hurricane condition of the living areas of your home. Waiting upstairs, the stench of the living room sofa will have mixed with the respective odors of a sink full of dirty dishes and a half-eaten chicken and broccoli casserole that has sat on the kitchen counter for three days. Endless homework and hours of school, trying to make life better and easier for your husband and children, have torn your attention away from the need to keep a house and family up and running.
So here you are, cowering under musty covers, exhausted and desperate to avoid responsibility, with your head of matted greasy hair buried in a flat pillow. Somewhere in the quest to earn a degree and realize all those old dreams, things got turned upside down. The wrong couch became part of your life and unleashed a negative force that has been wreaking havoc ever since.
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Hunger and the need for daylight pulled me from my bed that day, somewhere around lunch time. After a few feeble stretches and a necessary shower, I managed to slowly pull each leg, one foot at a time, up the ridiculously narrow stairs, dreading the smell that I knew I was climbing into, and cursing the previous owners of this house, who in their inexperience had built this 19th century-style stair case when digging out the basement and remodeling the home. It was all their fault. Them and the measuring tape we never used.
My musings on the issue of blame were unexpectedly cut short by the combined smells of rubbing alcohol, floor cleaner, and, faintly, a burning cinnamon-scented candle. At the top of the stairs, to the left, the sounds of a football game were coming from the family TV that I remember swearing would never be a front room fixture. To the right, the kitchen was gleaming, floor to ceiling, reflecting the glow of a cinnamon candle in a glass jar, sitting where the rotting casserole had been. I recovered from the momentary shock, crossed the landing, and noticed that the entry way had been swept, it’s shelves and knick-knacks dusted, and fresh flowers now filled a vase, perched precariously on a narrow buffet table under the north-facing window.
Astonished and encouraged, I filled a bowl with cornflakes and milk and followed the muffled sounds of excited whispers into the front room. The wrong sofa sat in its regular place, clumpy and clunky and adorned with three children and my husband of eleven years, who somehow had grown twice as handsome overnight. The smell of the rubbing alcohol, used to scrub the sofa cushions, wafted up to greet me along with the delighted, giggling, and exhausted faces of my little family. Returning their smiles, I just stood there, listening, as they excitedly told me, all at once, what each of them had done, while I “slept all day.”
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Tonight, you will probably notice that your bed is not nearly as comfortable as it once was. You might wonder if it’s a good time to talk your husband into a new mattress. Your answer, before you even ask, will be him rolling away from you, taking your share of the blankets with him. For a fleeting moment, you might consider going upstairs to sleep on the couch—or the floor—with a blanket all to yourself. Instead, you’ll probably turn onto your stomach, yank the covers back over you, and remember that you promised the kids a trip to Disneyland when you finally graduate, and should probably start saving your money. . .
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My corn flakes went soggy, and a pile of homework stayed in my backpack in the hallway. The cinnamon candle eventually burned itself out. And me? I just sat, serenely; my body crammed between my husband and kids for the next several hours. And somehow, I found myself perfectly content . . . on the wrong couch.

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